
This photograph inspired the below so many thanks to Abe Kleinfeld of blogbyabe.com for allowing me to use it to illustrate.
Sarah sits
silently smiling
sipping sugared spearmint
splendorous surroundings
supply soul sating sanctuary
stimulating scenery
sparks speculation
Sarah sits serenely
shepherding sagacity
scribbling; shaping stanzas solemnly
strangers startle
sabotaging solitude
speaking, shrieking symphony
shatters silence
Sarah’s secret sanctuary spoiled
snarling sullenly
she stands suddenly
Sarah stormily saunters south
~Melanie Blackwell
scintillating sibilance
satisfying support ;0)
The silly sausage.
::snickering softly::
Ahhh… so well done. You have true talent!
Thank you very much. Hope you visit back and find more that you enjoy 🙂
Simply splendid story, sweetie!
Savory, slanted sentiment 🙂
So very, very, very clever! Applause!!!! 🙂 🙂
Thank you! ::Takes a bow:: You are too kind 🙂
Sarah’s script should surely symbolise sacrifice
she suffered surround sound
strangers startled stares
she suffered
significantly
she deserved
silent solitude
Sorry Melanie I couldn’t resist. Super.
Superb!
Love it, Melanie! Very clever and well-written. I can see why that picture inspired you…and I would also be snarling if my solitude was interrupted. Bravo! x
Hi Wordiful Melanie. Thank you for liking my poem ‘ Changing The Rules’. Best Wishes, The Foureyed Poet.
Thank you 🙂