I miss you
you with your over-loud laughter
laughter that is contagious
contagious epidemic of happiness
happiness spreads all around
around you no one can remain sad
sad tears dry on salty cheeks
cheeks blossom when kissed by joy
joy from you effervescent presence.
17 responses to “Laughter”
Adorable bubble and wonderful words.
Thanks to adorable you 🙂
Ooo, I actually noticed that you started every line with the last word of the previous line. I am much more aware of stylistic things now than I used to be before finding your blog. I am not sure what style this is, but I like it! It has a wonderful flow. I have a poem scheduled to be posted in about 4-1/2 hours that this poem reminds me of subject-wise. 🙂
Thank you! I happy that I’m exposing you to new ways to delight us with your words 🙂 It is a loop poem. No limits on syllable count and such just the last word of the first line becomes the first word of line two, last word of line 2 becomes the first word of line 3,etc. Looking forward to your poem.
(I’m a bit behind on reading everyone’s work…trying to catch up!)
I like people who make me laugh, too, but I doubt I ever managed to say so quite that elegantly. And playfully. 🙂
Thank you but I have no doubt you have expressed it more eloquently…remember I have read some of your work! I plan to read more of your charming tales as time permits 🙂
Oh, now, you did say it elegantly! I’ll be glad to share more stories with you! Warmly, Brenda
This has a lovely form to it..I love that you start each new line with the last word of the previous line, it wraps it so sweetly.
Thank you for your kind comment. Glad you enjoyed and welcome to wordifull, come back any time 🙂
this is quite cute nice pick me up!
So, “Loop” poem is the name of that style… cool! I have a few like that and I never knew the name. Love this one! Excellent.
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