February 1, 2014 · 5:01 AM
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Drizzle

Rainfall

the sky

d  r  i  z  z  l  e  s

greyness

hours

stacked

on

hours

hours turned to days

the sun 

has been in hiding

all light is

M.I.A.

~Melanie Blackwell

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11 responses to “Drizzle”

  1. Oloriel
    February 1, 2014 at 5:07 AM

    Short and striking! 😀
    I just wish it was true for my part of the world, we got very cold, strong , harsh winds and snow, and amidst all that Sun is shining!

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  2. hitandrun1964
    February 1, 2014 at 12:00 PM

    Somber and playful…nice:) Love it.

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  3. words4jp
    February 1, 2014 at 12:33 PM

    I like this – i wish it was raining – not snowing. 🙂

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  4. Rajiv
    February 2, 2014 at 10:54 AM

    Long time since I saw a post from you. We have sunshine! Yippee… After two weeks of fog and grey

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  5. Miranda Stone
    February 7, 2014 at 9:40 AM

    A beautiful poem in its simplicity, Melanie.

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