hush now
no one wants to hear
keep it to yourself
don’t air our dirty laundry
what would the neighbors think?
hush now
don’t cry
we are all big boys and girls
crying is for babies
or in the dark of night all by yourself
hush now
don’t speak
some truth might just slip out
we wouldn’t want that
now, would we?
~Melanie Thomason
Brutality cloaked in soft words. Another powerful poem Melanie.
Thank you so much. I’m keeping this comment tucked in my pocket 🙂
You use so few words to say volumes. This is outstanding.
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Another one of Melanie’s new and powerful poems.
Thank you so much. Really.
Small words with large impact …
Greetings from Germany,
Salva 🙂
Thank you
🙂
Shhhhhhhush😉. (Good one)
🙂
this one has my mind racing in between the lines – lovey work Melanie
Yay! I love it when that happens 🙂 Thank you for your kind words and for the visit!
Oh, I love the message here, Melanie. Wonderful and powerful.
Thank you so much.
Ironically, some people tend to combine all these ‘hushes’ with ‘be yourself’.
That’s one of your punch poems, the very kind I am in love with (no masochism intended, but…)
I’m so glad to see you footsprints here. Glad to provide a punch 😉
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