June 29, 2014 · 9:35 PM
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duet

Sun and Moon duet;

 a visual symphony.

Night will be here soon.

The sun’s bright light absorbed by

the glow of a honeyed moon.

∴

~Melanie Blackwell

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19 responses to “duet”

  1. Rajiv
    June 29, 2014 at 9:38 PM

    Wow…. This is almost romantic!

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  4. yeseventhistoowillpass
    June 29, 2014 at 10:40 PM

    Very nice:)

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  5. yeseventhistoowillpass
    June 29, 2014 at 10:43 PM

    Very nice! I love lotus pictures.. Pure bliss ahhhh

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  6. laurie27wsmith
    June 30, 2014 at 1:07 AM

    The setting sun hides his gaze as the rising moon lifts her silvery raiment’s.
    Sorry Melanie, you inspired me.

    Reply
  7. Oloriel
    July 1, 2014 at 5:22 PM

    Perfectly beautiful image described, it was as though I could feel it on my skin

    Reply

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