This Quatern* Poem is another of several poetry forms that Bianca & I are collaborating on. Bianca has written stanzas 2 and 4, and I have written stanzas 1 and 3.
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You will speak when you are ready
comforting you by listening
weeping over crackling phone line
silence with intermittent sobs
∞
When darkness falls and shadows pounce
You will speak when you are ready
Illuminate your room of grief
reveal the silver lining
∞
As morning light breaks through your gloom
Shrug that beast called past off your back
You will speak when you are ready
With clarity of heart and mind
∞
Your spirit will rise on birdsong
when you embrace what’s yet to come
Focus on the gold horizon
You will speak when you are ready
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© 2013 B.G. Bowers and Melanie Blackwell
*A Quatern is a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains. It is similar to the Kyrielle and the Retourne. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two, third line of stanza three, and fouth line of stanza four. A quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme. line 1 line 2 line 3 line 4 line 5 line 6 (line 1) line 7 line 8 line 9 line 10 line 11 (line 1) line 12 line 13 line 14 line 15 line 16 (line 1)
This is seriously amazing. I’m in awe as usual!
Aww, thank you 🙂
Wonderful poem , so evocative! Also thanks for explaining the form as I wasn’t familiar with it but will want to try it out now I am!! 🙂
Yeah! Glad you liked it and I’m looking forward to reading yours 🙂
Not an easy form… Very well done!
Many thanks!
Bravo!
This is wonderful. I am really enjoying your work and the two of you obviously work very well together. 🙂
Bianca is definitely a wonderful person to work with 🙂 Glad you enjoyed!
I really like it, though the rebel in me keeps whispering ‘what if I don’t want to be ready?’ 🙂
Oh, I almost forgot:
* outstandingly educational (now we’re even 😉 )
:0) No rush…when you are ready.
And, touche
I’m glad you are posting these on both of your blogs as it is a shame when only one of you receives comments that are addressed to both of you. Now I can say, go look at what I wrote on B.G. Bowers’ blog. 😀
🙂 And I did…thanks again 🙂
Such depth of emotion conveyed so beautifully. Thank you Melanie and Bianca. I refer to an older post of my own, that this poem strikes a cord within myself. http://wp.me/p3gIo8-20.
Thank you! Going to read yours now 🙂
Beautiful… Beautiful.
Thank you x 2 🙂
Wonderful and no, I’m not going to try it:)
Thanks! and well, ok…if you don’t want a challenge…LOL
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